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Feather (Haiku)
by Adela Ruiz (Age: 21)
copyright 12-31-2003


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  Feather (Haiku)
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The feather is cold
floating with the winters wind
Into the night sky




(This is my first haiku. Please tell me if there is anything wrong with it, and if so a way I can fix it.
Also if you have any help on how I can improve I would like to hear it.)




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01-23-2005 Katie Moss    

I can't say it enough, I love haikus! ^_^ *huggles you* I'm gonna tell this one to my literature teacher. Love it.
04-29-2004 Adela Ruiz    

oh, thanks
04-25-2004 Lisa Anderson    

I like it! i had to read it about four times until I could really fully get the whole meaning out of this haiku. Very nice, keep writing! P.S.-I love web design too! It is awesome. If you have not noticed it already, your flower background pic is not worknig on your author's page. I too made two graphics for mine. Keep up the good work!!
02-22-2004 Anne W.    

This is great!!! Nice job.
02-22-2004 Rissa T.    

Very cooooooowel!!!!!!!!!!!! I likes it very much!
01-09-2004 Heather Jackson    

Very nice work. I saw the imagery here.
01-06-2004 Christopher Doss    

I really like Haiku and this is good. A lot of thoughts went through my poor wee brain reading this. First, a simple vision of a feather floating along above a white, snow covered world..facing the wind alone. How many times have I been there? Good write
01-03-2004 Ajda G.    

You're first time? Woah, you're good! Keep on writing. Haiku-writing might just be your natural ability.
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