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No way, i wont love again
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 12-08-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
I was once a fool of love,
I did everything right,
but still it was wrong.
I loved her so,
but no reply at all,
it's like a drug you,
you see,
it addicts you everytime,
it tares you up inside,
makes your heart believe a lie.
I see the truth now,
love is nothing but a game,
I was blind to see the truth,
that love is fake,
not real,
no.
I refuse to love again,
yes that is true,
but then I hear it call my name.
I wont love again,
not today,
never again,
no way,
now how,
not a chance,
but it's in your heart,
inside your soul.
What should I do?
Yes or No?
But now I see the truth,
that I am still
madly.
deeply,
truly,
in love with you...




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04-21-2006 Leigh G.    

If you didn't ever fall in love again this would most likely be the last poem you submitted. As always, grammar needs to be fixed, this piece needs it extra if you don't mind me saying. It's not half bad though. Love is a fickle emotion that is only derived from common interests and all of that. It's only ability is to bind someone down and chain their wings. Good work, keep writing.

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
12-13-2003 Emily Garwood    

a really good poem, made with care and love keep it up
emy
12-10-2003 Christopher Doss    

I'm with you Paul! I shall never love again..until next time!
12-10-2003 Joan Jotz    

Paul...P.S. the spelling in the line "it tares you up inside..." Should be TEARS.

Joan
12-10-2003 Joan Jotz    

Paul;
You have expressed the strength of love's force. It seems that no matter how hard you resist, you always turn back to love's warmth...even if it hurts! Like the comparison of love to an addiciton...it is like a drug. Nice simile.

In real life, don't be too down on love. If you've never had it, how can you appreciate the sweetness of discovering a new love? Love doesn't die, it just softens.
I enjoyed your poem. Hope my comments help you in some way.

Joan
12-09-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Great job Paul. My favorite line in here is:
But now I see the truth
that I am still
Madly,
deeply
Truly,
In love with you.

Moony
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