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I wish we could be more then friends
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 12-09-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Sometimes I dream about us,
we are getting closer,
everytime.
I wanna kiss you,
and hold your hand.
Don't you feel the same way.
I want to touch you,
and hold your hand.
I wish we could be more then just friends.
You smile with such beauty,
your hair shines like the sun,
your lips burst with love and joy,
I can see us walking and holding hands.
I want to get closer to you,
kiss you over and over,
you I want you,
I really wish we were more then just friends.
Everytime I try to get close,
you pull away,
baby don't you care,
wouldn't you be there?
Don't you understand,
I wish we could be more then friends.
Please give me a chance,
and I know I'll make you understand,
that maybe,
just maybe,
we could be more then friends...


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04-21-2006 Leigh G.    

This isn't half bad. Is it a song? It's rather repetitive, and needs major work on the grammar. My offer to help you still stands, you know. Well, so I don't make you completely sick of my suggestions and that like I won't go on and on in this comment... Good work, keep writing, you'll improve... You should make this 10+

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12-13-2003 Emily Garwood    

good poem, and interesting too! you make it sound like ur more than friends..but yet not going out with eachother...
12-10-2003 Christopher Doss    

Nice Paul
12-10-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Hi Diggy,
This is a real good poem. Keep up the good work.
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