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Shine
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 12-10-2003

Age Rating: 7 to 127

You said come to me,
and I will keep you close,
but the closer I get,
the harder it seems,
I find myself pulling away,
don't give up,
you are the one I need,
I still love you so,
heartbreak gets me everytime,
I have made mistakes before,
but I will try.
You say lay it down,
give it up,
no matter what it is,
I make failures,
please dont give up on me,
its your love I need,
I need your love to cross this river wide,
love,
hope,
beauty,
shines in your soul,
I have fallen so much,
but everytime your love has helped me through,
I know its you and me,
no one else,
now love,
hope,
beauty,
shines within my soul.
Thank you...

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04-23-2006 Leigh G.

The only way you can get past pain is get up and walk. Keep moving forward, it's the only way to accomplish anything. We may never forget, but we don't need to dwell on the painful parts of our lives. You need to edit this one and an example of your kinds of mistakes are things like spelling "don't" "dont." You also need to add capital letters and all of that sort. My offer to help you edit still stands... Good work, keep writing.

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders

08-21-2004 Jane L.

Wow this poem is good.

12-13-2003 Emily Garwood

wonderful...!!!!!!!!!!!

12-13-2003 Katie Moss

Very good, but I feel that I've heard some of the lines somewhere... I well, that's just me! ^.^' keep writing!

12-11-2003 Moses Hochstetler

Good write, Paul.

Moses

12-11-2003 Jessalyn Hamby

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!

12-10-2003 Toni Sweeney

Wow diggy,
This poem is so awesome I can not wait till the next poem you write.
Toni S.