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Blood Girl
by Jessalyn Hamby (Age: 22)
copyright 12-11-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I can remember
A girl I used to know
In the mirror
She was so beautiful
I can remember
She lived life so dilgenlty
She made a wish
And would bleed
She never really wanted this
Only to be loved
And now she bleeds
Without hesitation
Breaking skin
Moving on, going on
Forever unknown
Forever alone


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02-09-2004 Caitlin M.    

Cool, I especially liked the last two lines.
12-23-2003 Nancy Pawley    

Jessalyn, writing frees you from being forever unknown and forever alone. Keep it up.
Nancy
12-13-2003 Debra Rose    

In the second line do you mean "used to know"

This is a frightening poem, Jessie. Reminds me of the days when I used to slice, and the times I still do (however rare they may be).

And i just have to say...I love the eloquent way Steffie wrote you her comment. I agree. The numbness adds to the "nifty mood and all that good poetry smuff." LOL!

Great job, Jessie.

Forever,
Debra
12-11-2003 Alecia Scarlett    

I really like this poem. It shows alot about your personality.
12-11-2003 Jessalyn Hamby    

well honestly i felt very numb writing it. it's about how i use to be and who i am now. but thanx.
12-11-2003 Stefanie Mendoza    

I don't kow, I might just be me, but this poem feels kinda numb, you know? It adds to the whole nifty mood and all that good poetry smuff. Too many people I know can relate to this poem.... good write though, Jessalyn!
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