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Escape From Reality
by Eric Carrillo (Age: 28)
copyright 08-23-2001


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
When a thought develops, it is hard to put it on to paper.
To be able to shut out all external noise, to be carried away in
thought; that would be a nice skill to have. When I have a
worry, or a disturbing thought, I can not run away. It is a
monster, a beast bearing its teeth, a bad dream, an enemy that
follows me where ever I go. I can not get rid of it. It hunts me
down chases me around, until I fall back with exhaustion. Then,
slowly at first, it begins to approach me. It moves silently
across the ground, like a lion stalking prey. I lay there
silently, paralyzed with anxiety. I wish real hard that this
terrible nightmare will go away, but I know that it will finish
me off sooner than I could ever imagine...




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04-28-2004 Katie Moss    

^^ very good! Kind of reminds me of my life ¬¬; anyhow, I'm reading 'em all! X3


09-05-2001 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Haunting thoughts and daunting taunts
keep me awake so many nights
Flaunting wants and wanting jaunts
seeking a way to end my frights ...
And still the beast remains as he was.
:(
I know the feeling!


04-01-2001 Amber McCabe    

Excellent story telling! The imagery really takes one away.




04-01-2001 Beverley McInnis    

There are nightmares where one needs to wake from quickly, this poem sounds like a description of that. Interesting form, like a story not a poem.




04-01-2001 Eric Carrillo    

HI, thanksBetty, for pointing out that wording error. I apreciate it, when people comment.




04-01-2001 Yuushi Rose    

Incredibly though provoking, and truthful. Though I must say, I am slightly envious, for it seems all I ever can do is escape, but when I'm in reality, I'm too realistic...I guess all of us are bothered, either too far one way or the other. Beautiful writing...I'm going to keep my eye out for more.

~Yuushi-chan~




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