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Day's Last Breath
by Joan Jotz (Age: 54)
copyright 12-12-2003


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Day's Last Breath
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In the luminous glow of dusk,
Night's overture whispers to fantasy.
Gentle winds rustle
Emerald forest hues;
Wing-beats wreath
The velvet woods;
Fireflys betray a topaz moon;
Crickets embroider with silken tunes.
AND...In day's last breath,
Darkness shrouds solitude...
TRUTH is veiled by CHARM.


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12-12-2004 SamiJo Mcquiston    

OOO, I can relate to this poem alot.
Night does hide reality, with sparkling stars, and a luminous moon.
Keep up the good work.
03-23-2004 Carmen C.    

^-^ wow good job Joan I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work.
12-21-2003 Gregory Christiano    

I am captivated by this fantasy...it is like a beatuiful story that you may one day want to expand...I see an epic poem here...no doubt of it!
12-14-2003 Regina S.    

This leaves you with a very calm and peaceful feeling, sort of like watching the sunset! Terrific write!
12-14-2003 Praveen Agnihotri    

Joan your imagery is very good.Keep it up.
12-13-2003 Paul Kangas    

sounds like a fantasy or dream
I like this!
12-12-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

It is indeed a pleasure to read every one of your poems; like viewing a smorgasbord of delightful entrees, and wondering what's for dessert! This is simply a wonderful short poem, and the picture gives it an added aura of serenity and charm.

Your devoted fan,
Moses
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