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the new me, disturbed
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 12-13-2003

Age Rating: 13 to 127

The one boy you knew was gone,
he dead,
now say hello to the new me.
My hair changes to black,
I live in a dark room,
I feel my life is a dark room,
darkness fills my life,
I feel hotter,
more evil,
painful,
hurt,
scared, happy.
Sorry but it's the truth,
I am gone,
say hello to me,
the new me.
Piercings everywere fill my skin,
black lip-stick sticks on my lips,
my eyes are dark,
my room is dark, everything is dark.
Cuts are everywhere,
from the palm of my skin to my neck,
everywhere.
I am pleasure,
I want pleasure,
I give pleasure.
Screeching screams fill inside my head screaming.
Voices yell but whisper.
I don't care if you want me,
I'm yours and only yours.
I used you,
you used me,
we got even.
You said you wanted a bad boy,
well here I am.
It is you and me.
Deeper,
deeper,
and deeper we go.
I can taste your desire.
I know it,
you want it?
You got it!
Here I am,
ready for you.
Flashing screams in my head.
Disturbing images look at me in the mirror.
I realize it is me and only me.
I am alone in the corner,
crying,
knowing I am alone,
disturbed I am,
I don't know what else to say,
I have blossomed into someting deeper,
the new me,
now I am one of the bad.
Goodbye past...hello future!

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12-23-2003 Caitlin M.

Once you said you had cuts to the palm of your skin to your neck I got a little worried there. I didn't like the pleasure part when you said I give pleasure. That got me freaked out a little. I'm happy that most of this is not true.

12-21-2003 Christopher Doss

Man, I'm so glad I read the comments and discovered it is fiction. I was ready to email you with a lecture!...lol.

12-16-2003 Jessalyn Hamby

Okay I think everyone is relieved to know that this isn't true to you exactly. It worried me at some parts like the cutting, and that one part sounded a little sexual I don't know if you were going for that or not.This is a great poem, but my only little tiff about this is I'm considered to be "dark" so to say and this kind of gives a bad image of us "dark" people. Not all of us cut, and not all of us are so to say "bad ass". Yes I cut but I'm not a bad ass I'm kind of a whimp actually. I like the poem I just don't like the image it gives me. But great write I gave it a 10.

12-14-2003 Joan Jotz

Paul-
Relieved to know this is fiction and not fact!!!
Glad you cleared that up. You certainly accomplished the "scary" aspect. Your words definately have an intensity,and take the reader to the depths of a "disturbed" vision. Very creative,and ..... WHEW!!!!!
Joan

12-14-2003 Regina S.

*sighs in relief* Paul! You had me really worried too! but you did a really great job of taking on another persons view of the world! :D

12-14-2003 Toni Sweeney

Hi Paul,
I am so glad this is not true. When I was reading through this you haad me worried. But I am glad that you said it is not true. This is a really scary poem. It scared the wits out of me.
Toni S.

12-13-2003 Emily Garwood

pretty good for being made up!! well done

12-13-2003 Paul Kangas

just want 2 let ya'll know that most of this isn't true, i just wanted to write someting disturbing, intense, and scary.

12-13-2003 Joan Jotz

Hi Paul,
This is an ominous poem. I will send comments to you via your email.

Joan

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