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Footprints
by Regina S.
copyright 12-14-2003
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Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
I left footprints in the sand one day
running along the shore,
the sparkling waves washed them away
for others to make more.

I left footprints in the snow one night
beneath a full moon's sky,
the morning melted them away
and left me wondering why.

I left footprints on a heart one time,
once when we laughed and played,
and though I'm miles and miles away,
I know they'll never fade.


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08-03-2004 Emily Garwood    

nice comparison about the footprints in ordinary things compared to the footprints left in someones heart...nice write

Emy
07-29-2004 Jack Curson    

Excellent write Regina, brings back fond memories of when I was in the Army and my now wife lived in California.
06-02-2004 Anne W.    

This is such a great poem, Reggie. It shows wonderful expression and it flows perfectly. Beautiful piece.

~*anne*~
03-11-2004 Matthew Czigan    

you tlk about world war 3 paul... better make sure the M16 aint jammed.

0==(:::::Tasbain::::>
03-03-2004 Anne W.    

'For others to make more' beautiful line!
12-27-2003 Gregory Christiano    

Absolutely perfect. Marvelous expression of deep emtotion and imagination.
12-21-2003 Christopher Doss    

I think out of all of your poems I have read, this is my favorite so far. Very nice
12-19-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

This one is about as perfect as it gets, Regina! A really great short poem, and one that you can treasure forever!

Moses
12-15-2003 Regina S.    

I'M GETTING BACK AT ALL OF YOU PEOPLE, JUST YOU WAIT! Revenge WILL be mine! *evil laugh* n_n
12-15-2003 Paul Kangas    

IM GONNA GET BACK AT U TONI!!! hehehehe...along with mardi and regina! World war 3 has started, oh i love this poem, no, it was dredful, just kiddin'
very good, i like this!
12-14-2003 Joan Jotz    

Hi Regina,
This is a very nice poem. You have a good rhythm going,and the repetition of the 'footprints' accents the verse and gives continuity.
I like the twist in the last stanza...whre in the others the footprints somehow get erased, in the last stanza you show us that some impressions will last forever. Nice Job!!

Joan
12-14-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Great job Reggie. And are you going to get Paul back. I am dying to know.
Toni S.
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