05-01-2013
Walter Jones
a grasp of both time and mind mingle in a voice screaming, so much left to the page and canvas, perfection lives and die in the minds of those find reality in the write of other, I have a huge smile.. Walt
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08-03-2004
Emily Garwood
nice comparison about the footprints in ordinary things compared to the footprints left in someones heart...nice write
Emy
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07-29-2004
Jack Curson
Excellent write Regina, brings back fond memories of when I was in the Army and my now wife lived in California.
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06-02-2004
Anne Whelmer
This is such a great poem, Reggie. It shows wonderful expression and it flows perfectly. Beautiful piece.
~*anne*~
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03-11-2004
Matthew Czigan
you tlk about world war 3 paul... better make sure the M16 aint jammed.
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03-03-2004
Anne Whelmer
'For others to make more' beautiful line!
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12-27-2003
Gregory Christiano
Absolutely perfect. Marvelous expression of deep emtotion and imagination.
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12-21-2003
Christopher Doss
I think out of all of your poems I have read, this is my favorite so far. Very nice
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12-19-2003
Moses Hochstetler
This one is about as perfect as it gets, Regina! A really great short poem, and one that you can treasure forever!
Moses
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12-15-2003
Regina S.
I'M GETTING BACK AT ALL OF YOU PEOPLE, JUST YOU WAIT! Revenge WILL be mine! *evil laugh* n_n
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12-15-2003
Paul Kangas
IM GONNA GET BACK AT U TONI!!! hehehehe...along with mardi and regina! World war 3 has started, oh i love this poem, no, it was dredful, just kiddin'
very good, i like this!
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12-14-2003
Joan Jotz
Hi Regina,
This is a very nice poem. You have a good rhythm going,and the repetition of the 'footprints' accents the verse and gives continuity.
I like the twist in the last stanza...whre in the others the footprints somehow get erased, in the last stanza you show us that some impressions will last forever. Nice Job!!
Joan
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12-14-2003
Toni Sweeney
Great job Reggie. And are you going to get Paul back. I am dying to know.
Toni S.
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