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love takes time(to let you go)
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 12-14-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Love takes time to heal when your hurting so much,
I was so scared,
and blind,
to let you go but maybe it was right,
but i still love you.
I don't know what to do,
should stay or go?
I was once a fool it is true,
I couldn't find a reason to love,
Now I feel cold and hurt,
cuz I have realized what I have lost,
love takes time work all it's magic,
I couldn't stand the pain of letting you go,
but maybe It was right,
love takes time,
but I still love you,
I still need you.
We are differen't,
but alike.
Your heart is pure,
my heart is cold.
You said love should never die,
but it does.
I couldn't find a reason to let you go,
love takes time to work it's way through,
I was stupid,
and pathetic,
to let you go.
Now I know what I have lost.
I need you,
I am nothing without you.
You might say what we had was gone.
You might tell me that you don't want me.
You might sat it is time to move on,
but im down on my knees begging for you,
it's time to see the truth,
that im still in love with you.
You have always been the one and only one.
You have said that you love me,
but was it a lie,
tell me.
I know what I said,
I truly love you,
now it is time for you to see the truth,
that I am still in love with you...




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04-23-2006 Leigh G.    

Oh, boy, you need to fix the grammar and spelling. You've spelled I'm or I wrong so many times it's painful. And it's because, not cuz. The core of the poem is good, but it seems familiar, you should try to write about something besides love. It's true, and love is a painful thing to heal, but if you keep groping after it, and keep getting wounds of the same severity, then you should give your school work a bit more focus than your girl or boyfriends. Keep writing, you'll improve.

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
08-09-2004 Sarah B.    

this is a great poem but you have some spelling errors.
12-15-2003 Emily Garwood    

awww thats a really sweet poem it is hard to let go sometimes specially when you realise you think u made a mistake...

i have one or two suggestions:
"should stay or go? " you need to add an 'I' "should I stay or go?"

"love takes time work all it's magic," you need to add a 'to' between time and work.

last one is here:
"You might sat it is time to move on," i think sat is supposed to be say.

thats all i can see...none the less another great read :)
keep writing i can't wait to read more!!
Emy
12-14-2003 Cortney Jaruzel    

Good job! I like this poem. I liek the feeling too. I'v been there and done that, i know you message well. Keep writing. :)
12-14-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Good job Diggy.
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