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(Abandon)
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 01-10-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Warning: Can we say BDSM? If you can't say that, I think you should go back to English class....)




Punish me.
Can't you see that I'm not worthy?
Head to ground, nothing inside.
Decaying,
Decaying,
Make me see what I'm missing,
Not being alive?

Retrain me,
Sweet little pet at your feet,
Nothing else, nothing else,
Why does it have to end like this?
What did I do?
What did I do?
Punish me.
Please!
I'm on my knees before you.
Please, dear Master, do something,
Other than turn your head away.
Make me a better person,
Through the pain of your strong hand.
I'm nothing without you,
Unworthy of life.

Nothing is left,
Inside this pet you've created.
Can't you see,
If you leave now what will happen?
Your whip,
Your whip,
It defines the entirety of my essence.
Collars,
Humiliation,
But why are you going away?
Why are you abandoning me, leaving me like this?
I'm broken,
I need you.
Need you.
Who will punish me when I'm wrong?
Who will keep me from returning
To who I was
If you're not here to control me?

Don't turn your head,
Why does it end like this?
Decaying,
Decaying,
Don't go away.




Authors note: What the hell is wrong with me?


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01-22-2004 Nancy Pawley    

Now don't get me wrong, I'll never be anyone's slave or pet, or give myself cause to think I'm unworthy or in need of punishment to feel alive, but Debra, there's nothing wrong with you that I can see..it's when we bottle up what we feel and think inside that causes us the most harm. Fantastic write.
Nancy


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