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Raining Rainbows
by Rissa T. (Age: 17)
copyright 03-19-2004


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
See the colors?
down the they go.
Its seems they are like falling snow.
Or maybe raindrops in the spring.
Or maybe it was an angels tears.
But that would just confirm my fears,
That little bits of heaven are falling to earth.
Then we would destroy that too.
Then what would we do?
Maybe it was a rainbow melting in the sun,
or maybe that rainbow was weeping,
For all of nature that's creeping,
Creeping down to hide beneath roads
and buildings we've created.
I'm not really sure what I saw,
all I know is it was without a flaw.
It was a dream come true.


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06-10-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

I think that rainbows are very nice to look at. Your poem was pretty good. I do like the way you started talking about the colors. Thanks, Anthony
07-21-2004 Lisa A.    

This is a cool poem with a powerfuil message. Unfortunaetly, I was a bit confused. I really like it though! Very poetic.
03-22-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem Rissa. There is a few typos though. The first one I saw was the mabye. That is suppose to be maybe.there is a few times in the poem that mistake was made. The other mistake I saw was in the 12th line thats is suppose to be that's. You may want to ask some one about that though I am not 100% sure that is right. Rather then those few mistakes the poem is great. Keep up the awesome work.
Toni S.
01-06-2004 Christopher Doss    

This is awesome Rissa
01-01-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great Job Rissa. Keep up the good work.
Toni S.
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