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In The Park
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 12-19-2004


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
In the park,
Just up my road, I can sit for hours,
No one will pass,
Or see me there.
I can think,
Breathe the clean air, nothing's polluted,
But my mind is,
I just need to sit and think for a while.

Now it's dark,
I've been thinking for hours,
Sitting under a lamp,
Wanting to feel something else.
I ache from the fights,
My head hurts from the words,
Just sit here a while longer...
Then i'll go home.

Past midnight now,
Its started to rain,
But I continue to sit,
Finally returning home...freezing.
That reminds me of the frosty looks,
Those ones my Mum gives me,
Each time I do something wrong,
Or say too much.

Now I don't care,
Say what you please,
Or throw another fight,
I'm immune to this tonight.
I can smile tonight,
For once I won the fight,
The fight didn't hurt,
One problem down, which one's next?


*note* i'm gonna do it right this time, i'm fed up of pleading for a right...


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06-07-2004 Lisa A.    

This poem is very nice. There are a few minor errors though. When you say 'Its started to rain,' You say Its. Its is refering to the ownership of started. I would suggest saying It has. That would clean that line up much better. =) I really enjoyed how you time passed and you stayed in the park. This poem shows great talent. Possibly, you may want to consider playing around with your commas and periods. The last paragraph kind of confused me, however that may be a very good thing! Defiantely keep writing. I really enjoyed this poem.
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