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Snowy Lips
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 12-20-2003


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
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Snow on your warm lips
still hides the love and un-love,
over and over.
Infused with throaty whisper
and honey touching,
dark night is melting slowly.

I've melted your snowy lips.
But how I can melt your heart?


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07-07-2008 Brooke M.    

beautiful,,,simply beautiful. It is so true! But, sometimes even the hardest of hearts can be warmed...even though it takes so long. The imagery was brilliant and the writing touching and full of beauty...great work!!
07-10-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Sometimes people experience a loss that makes them with hold their love. Thinking if they don't give totally, they can't be hurt. True love will not be that way, for the feelings are too strong to hold back! At least that is my experience. This is a really nice poem. Anthony
08-06-2004 Chelsea Armstrong    

*teary eyed* All too much can I relate to this. Frozen lips can easily be melted, but a stubborn heart is always a challenge. But as I always say "there is no point in life, with out a challange". Great job on this one Ira. Keep up the good works
12-30-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

I find this very touching - and all too true in too many marriages. Wonderful poem, Ira.

Moses
12-21-2003 Irina Guschina    

Dear Joan,
thank you for your sensitive hearing and gentle heart.
With love,
Ira.
12-21-2003 Joan Jotz    

My friend Irina, this is soooo touching...lovely.
A few romantic suggestions ok??
I would change 'hot' to "warm lips",but that's just me. The 4th line is missing a syllable. How about "Infused with throaty whispers"?
The next to last line I feel should be more personal...maybe "I've melted your snowy lips".
Sad and sweet...you've touched the romantic in me!! Joan
12-21-2003 Toni Sweeney    

Great job Irina. Can not wait till next poem. :D
Toni S.
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