11-07-2009
Alan Reed
I find your imagery and your writes to be so excellently prepared. There is so much symbolism here and it fits the mechanics perfectly. You are a great writer. Please write more. -Alan
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07-07-2008
Brooke Marquette
beautiful,,,simply beautiful. It is so true! But, sometimes even the hardest of hearts can be warmed...even though it takes so long. The imagery was brilliant and the writing touching and full of beauty...great work!!
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07-10-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Sometimes people experience a loss that makes them with hold their love. Thinking if they don't give totally, they can't be hurt. True love will not be that way, for the feelings are too strong to hold back! At least that is my experience. This is a really nice poem. Anthony
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08-06-2004
Chelsea Armstrong
*teary eyed* All too much can I relate to this. Frozen lips can easily be melted, but a stubborn heart is always a challenge. But as I always say "there is no point in life, with out a challange". Great job on this one Ira. Keep up the good works
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12-30-2003
Moses Hochstetler
I find this very touching - and all too true in too many marriages. Wonderful poem, Ira.
Moses
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12-21-2003
Irina Guschina
Dear Joan,
thank you for your sensitive hearing and gentle heart.
With love,
Ira.
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12-21-2003
Joan Jotz
My friend Irina, this is soooo touching...lovely.
A few romantic suggestions ok??
I would change 'hot' to "warm lips",but that's just me. The 4th line is missing a syllable. How about "Infused with throaty whispers"?
The next to last line I feel should be more personal...maybe "I've melted your snowy lips".
Sad and sweet...you've touched the romantic in me!! Joan
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12-21-2003
Toni Sweeney
Great job Irina. Can not wait till next poem. :D
Toni S.
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