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Forbidden Affair
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 01-10-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
You're not supposed to be here,
Tapping on my window again.
But Christmas eve is slowly dying,
To give way to Christmas day.
"I want to give you your present,"
You whisper softly, slowly leaning,
Face mere inches from mine.
Oh, how forbidden this must be.
"You need to leave," I croak,
But you smile,
Moving closer on my bed,
Body oh-so-close, so close.
"Is that what you want."
Oh you smell like musk and rain,
And the fresh thunder sky,
Mingled with that scent that only you
Can seem to produce.
"No..." I should have said yes,
But should haves and could haves,
Never really mattered much, did they?
My mind is slowly fading,
And so is my heart.
Oh this lust that washes through me,
As you push between my legs.
"I want to give you eternity,
I want to explode the cosmos around you,
And let you taste the stars."
You always were a poet,
As tricky as Socrates and witty as
Poe,
Burningly caustic in an odd sort of way.
"You need to leave,"
"But you don't want that."
I try to say it doesn't matter what I want.
Want, need, and desire are different,
Except for at this moment.
Oh, how forbidden this must be.
Oh, how forbidden fruit tastes so sweet.
You press closer, closer.
The moon is slowly gaining height,
To start down its descent,
Like this rollercoaster of emotions you
Put me through.
"I can't do this," I want to whimper,
But your lips are on my neck,
And my pulse is gaining pace,
And my blood is pumping fast.
I feel like an animal on those shows,
In a mating dance of seduction and claiming,
And feel your hard body above me,
Beaming heat and pheramones.
Oh, the way you shudder as I kiss you back,
Oh, how you tremble
As I drag my nails down your back.
"This shouldn't happen,"
"But will you stop it?"
Oh, how forbidden this must be.

Oh, how forbidden this must be.




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03-30-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Ditto to what Tiffany said, and more, but what more can be said? When you're hot, you're hot. This extremely sensuous to me. Puts thought in my head that are unacceptable here!

My love is a sweet red rose.

great work!


12-13-2005 Tiffany Forster    

Wow. I absolutly love this, the emotion in this piece is amazing. This is one of those poems that takes your breath away.... for more than one reason. -grin- AMazing work.
-hands her a candy cane and a hot chocolate-
Happy Holidays!


05-03-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Strange, I think a shower would be good...a cold one! Great write! Anthony


01-22-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

Wow.... I can't believe I missed this one in workshop! Ahh! This poem was absolutely wonderful, Zozo! I loved the whole concept of losing a battle you never really wanted to win in the first place, letting your emotions over ride your common sense. Incredible job!

~Steffie~


01-21-2004 Lyle Berry    

Loved the stark sensuality and basic animal desire expressed here - things we are all vulnerable to, if we are honest with ourselves. Great imagery and tactile descriptions - tangible emotions that make the reader feel with you (or at least imagine they feel) the same emotions. Well done!
Warm regards,
Lyle


01-17-2004 Kira Prime    

I love the whole forbidden love deal which is expressed very beautifully in this poem. Has to be one of my favorites. :)


01-15-2004 Christopher Doss    

Absolutely amazing Debra


01-11-2004 Praveen Agnihotri    

"Oh, how forbidden fruit tastes so sweet"

"..I feel like an animal on those shows
In a mating dance of seduction and claiming,.."

Its a perfect example of how to deal with contrasting emotions,in a poem.

A very good piece.


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