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When We Were Leaving Jersey
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 12-25-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Delanie was one of my best buds. She has black hair, brown eyes. Her nickname I gave her is Benji. Since, she LOVES him and she calls me Billy or Tony. Delanie got a new skateboard for Christmas and was riding around my hood to test it. Today she was wearing her green capris and a belt with star marks. And her favorite Good Charlotte shirt. I was finished combing my hair. I took my lil bro's board since I don't have one. Oh well it had The Hulk on it, I didn't care. I was wearing my Sum 41 shirt and black pants. With my favorite acessory, the stud bracelet. Same black, converse sneakers as usual. Delanie yelled,"Come on Tony! There holding some skating tournament down the park! Let's go check it out." I hopped on my board,"Okay Benji, let's jet." We skated down the hood as fast as we could. Until, I fell on my ass though it'd be gay to cry over something like that! So, I just got back up and we were already two inches away from the park. We were the only girl skaters there. One guy snickered,"Hey Jim let's see if they got what it takes." I stood up for me and Del,"I bet you can only do an ollie!" The guy walked up to me,"My name's Chris I'm the leader of this joint."He looked at Delanie,"Now you and your stooge try to impress us. And we might make you part of this joint." I walked off,"This is a bunch of bullshit." Delanie pulled me back,"We accept your challenge!" I rolled my eyes and warmed up. Delanie was doing airwalks, supermans, and Christ Airs. I just followed Delanie since she was a better boarder. They were impressed of our tricks. Delanie said,"Thanks for saying we rule. But, we follow our own rules!" She walked off and I followed. Then a car stopped in front of Delanie. It was Bam Margera inside the car!!! He opened his window and threw us some boards,"Here try these they kick ass. I was watching you guys skate. So I gotta go, see ya later. Delanie said,"Cool...but weird....but cool!" We were in Delanie's room. Delanie sighed,"I wish we could leave Jersey. This place sucks cock, man." I picked up the skateboard,"Why don't we give it a shot!" She understood what I was saying. We went outside and started skating. And stopped by Delanie's bud Anthony. Delanie spoke,"Yo Anthony, were trying to escape Jersey. But were gonna need some faster equipment." He pointed to the gas station.
"Word on the street is they're is a race car club down there. You gotta show him what you got to get the car though. Good luck guys!"
We ran over to gas station and walked over to the leader.
He laughed,"You kids can try the race, but ya won't win!"
I ignored him and jumped in a car. Delanie hopped in another car glaring at the leader. He held up to flags,"I, the master of the race car club Harry anounce the race.......NOW!!!!"
Of course Del and me sucked at racing. So I was stuck crashed against someone else's car. Delanie just thought of bumper cars and slid through the race with ease. I ran out of the car and jumped in the other side of the car Delanie was in. She started the gas and took off. We were heading to New York City baby! After switching who drove there we were finally in NYC. We got out,"I can't belive were here! BYE BYE JERSEY!!!!!" Both of us spent cash on good shit. You know what I'm talking about! After having so much fun we took the bus home. We smiled,"That was the best day "When We Were Leaving Jersey."


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12-28-2003 Paul Kangas    

very good, few errors though


12-25-2003 Regina S.    

Nice story, Caitlin! Just read through it a little, you have a few typo's. :)


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