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Prayer
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 12-27-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
(Choka)


Doorbell… dear doorbell,
you are silent, so silent.
My heart behind door…
Ring quickly, so I hear you,
doorbell… dear doorbell,
let me know He is close here.
Please, let me know it before
He touches you and I die...


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08-30-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

For some reason I heard an oldies song in the back of my mind when reading this. (Mr. Postman). Silly me, I know. Anticipation... more than a heinz slogan, eh? :-)
01-02-2004 Betty Eskdale    

It is agony to wait for someone who may never come. I like how you address the doorbell as if it can have some control over your life.
12-30-2003 Christopher Doss    

Wow Irina, this is really good.
Very sorry I have neglected emailing you, Ive been sick again :(
Again, very good poem.
Chris
12-29-2003 Lyle Berry    

Again your incredible gift of saying so much with so few words shines through to us, your lucky readers. I love this one!
Warm Regards,
Lyle
12-28-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

Now it is perfect, Ira! I love it just the way it is.

Moses
12-27-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

Great work about anticipation and longing, Ira!
Reminds me of the old song "It is only the wind, your children are not at the door; the wind, restless wind, nothing more" - only in your poem, I think you were referring to a lover. Great work.

Moses
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