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Revenge
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 01-10-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Lahlahlah...uhm...yah.................
This is the type of thing that you look at later and wonder "Why in the HELL did I put that up?" So...yah...heh...soon as my friend Jaeq reads it, this is going to be hidden away with all of my other poems like this...meaning I think I may want to take it off of the site, or at least have it hidden v.v





You disrespectful little rodent,
You think you're god in all ways,
But down on your knees you're nothing,
Nothing more than my slave.
Say it now, and remember it for eternity.
I own you.
You will stay bowed,
Grovelling before me.
Taste the humiliation of your falling,
Taste the sin that bleeds from your flesh.
I'm tired of your insolence,
And that pride,
So wrongly placed.
You dared to drag me into something,
You knew could destroy me.
You've crossed your lines,
The girl that you once used,
Is now the Mistress that you fear,
And now I'll show you humility.
I will be a god to you,
Be superior in every way.
You'll taste the way you made us feel,
A less than human nothing.
You'll never be who you were again.
But unlike you,
I offer what you never did.
There is a chance to repent,
Before I destroy the person you are,
To find mercy in your punishment.
This doesn't mean your knees,
Won't be stained like ours.
But maybe someday,
You may remember who you were.
Repent,
And taste the pain you've caused to me.




*Blush* Hehehe...can't believe I actually posted this here. lol

Here's a tip to everyone else. Never EVER cross me. Grown men aren't afraid of me for nothing.


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07-05-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Well spank me and make me write hot checks! This is mean, but you don't scare me! I had five kids and four are girls. I still don't want to get on your bad side though. Love and kisses to you and yours! Anthony


01-22-2004 Debra Rose    

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!! YES! FEAR MY BOXERS!!!!!!!!!!!!


01-22-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

Heh... it's kinda funny how the poems that you seem to be most embarassed by or just really don't like, happen to be some of my favorites! I pray I never find myself in the position of your victim..... . But seriously, you have an astounding flair for putting so much force and power behind your words and this poem is a masterful showcase of that talent! You have thoroughly convinced me to fear your boxers too!! :P

~Steffie~


01-21-2004 Christopher Doss    

I think you should leave it, but it is your choice =)
Very powerful, I like it


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