The wind, the sea.
by
Tara M.
(Age: 15)
copyright 03-28-2004
Age Rating: 7 to 127
Only the sea will tell
as it rises and falls
Only the wind may hear
as it draws a breath
the crystal tears
of a lonely girl
who cries inside
and smiles on the outside
they long to reach out
and give her a friend
but she will not accept
others may wonder what it's like to be alone
although the wind
the sea
they know
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this is a very lovely poem
I can feel the ebb and flow of the sea
the pull and tug of the wind
but I think it would be better served if you left off the commas at the ends of the lines.
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