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Time to let u go
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 01-05-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Nothing is ever what it seems,
in your life,
and in your dreams.
Nothing makes sense,
but what should I do?
Now my time has come,
I know I must move on,
but I can't,
but I have to!
My heart has been loved,
then abused,
and broken.
You have shattered my soul,
and let me bleed,
but in many ways you have made things better.
I simply don't know what to say,
should I stay,
or should I go?
Your simply here,
then you dissapear.
I can't hold back anymore,
I must move on,
what we had was special,
but now thats gone.
Those days of nothing but love are gone,
are time is through,
don't ever ask me for reasons!
Why I live for you,
I do,
cause I simply still care for you.
But If you should ever still need me,
I shall and will return to your arms,
and stay forever.
Please baby please,
never be ashamed,
call my name,
tell me I am the one that you truley treasure!
But until then I shall remain silent,
as if I were dead...


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04-25-2006 Leigh G.    

Sayonara good grammar, huh? For starters the title should be: Time To Let You Go I could really go on and on about the grammar on this one, and how it's very familiar and reminds me of about five of your other pieces, but I don't want to sound like and old bi***. It just kinda bothers me that you go from English book grammar back to...to this. The core of the poem as potential, as always, but is also held back by the smelling and grammar like many of your other piece. Keep writing...

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders
01-08-2004 Travis Bauer    

good, but in the 26th line are should be our.
01-06-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem Pual. Keep up the awesome work.
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