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Life (Haiku)
by Christopher Doss (Age: 21)
copyright 01-21-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Life always changing...
Even the smile of a friend
eventually fades


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02-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

Very nice. Thanks, Anthony


08-29-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Like a condensed version of NOTHING GOLD CAN STAY. I love this and admire an author who can do what I can not... relay your message with brevity. I tend to ramble on so. :-)


04-17-2004 Irina Guschina    

I was reading your poem again. What an excellent words...sad and true...

Irina.


02-22-2004 Rissa T.    

^-----^ Very good!!


02-21-2004 Jenny Stein    

beautiful.


02-19-2004 Nancy Pawley    

So much that's said in so few words. Fantastic write, Christopher.
Nancy


02-04-2004 Debra Rose    

Chris,
Your poetry is always great, and you have done a wonderful job on this as well. It's true...friends aren't forever, which is a sad truth to life. Those you think you'll love forever drift away in a matter of years, sometimes even months. Wonderful job, with a very true, but sad, message.

forever,
Debra


01-22-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

Chris, in a word, this is simply AMAZING! You have a wonderful knack for capturing so much emotion and just stark reality in so few words. This haiku really hits hard.... wonderful job!

~Steffie~


01-21-2004 Regina S.    

I agree with Toni, but if you still stand by your opinion, Life does keep changing... and even the deepest wounds, eventually heal! :p That and I still can't believe how much power you can put into just 3 puny lines!! AWESOME Haiku!!!


01-21-2004 Toni Sweeney    

I say a smile of a friend never fades. Friends are there always. No matter what.
Toni S.


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