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Within you
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 01-15-2004

Age Rating: 7 to 127

Theres only you in my life,
the only thing thats right,
never say let go.
Just follow your heart and find the strength,
to destroy the evil inside,
then soon a bright day will begun with love,
peace,
joy,
happiness,
and hope.
Just don't give up,
or let your dreams fade away cause sometime in your life it will be your turn to shine under the beautiful light from the Heavens above.
Never let go, keep on moving, keep on living.
Find Jesus, let him into your heart and soon the darkness will fade away.
Don't let go,
please don't cry,
cause your the embrace which keeps you warm for your the sun which breaks the storm.
Don't lose your faith in him, if you keep your trust, then trust him, then he will come and save you, then you will have strength to carry on, then cast your fears aside, and you know you will survive.
So when you feel like all hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and then you'll finally see the truth,
that a hero lies in you...

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05-04-2006 Leigh G.

This poem is good, and the message is true, and it wasn't too bad even for me, a speculative person on all religions. The flow isn't too bad, but you have many typos. You're lousing praise points because of them... Starting lines with capital letters would also be a nice touch. In the long run, you've improved since I started reading your poems, but you still need to keep trying and always remember than you can always learn more and keep improving. Good work, keep writing. My only other objection is that this poem seems rather familiar, you've written about this sort of thing before hand...

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01-19-2004 Toni Sweeney

Great poem Diggy.
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01-17-2004 Anna Ellis

Excellent well worded

01-16-2004 Nancy Pawley

Paul, this is a wonderful write. I especially enjoyed these lines;
'Just don't give up,
or let your dreams fade away cause sometime in your life it will be your turn to shine under the beautiful light from the Heavens above.'
Nancy

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Within you by Paul Kangas (Age: 18) copyright 01-15-2004 Age Rating: 7 to 127

Within you
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 01-15-2004

Age Rating: 7 to 127