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Konrad Jacek Kantorowski
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Last Fall
by Walter Jones (Age: 63)
copyright 01-23-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
The shadow falls
In one I see all
It is the last call

I am going home

Questions on a rainy day
Silver birds at play
Words just get in the way

I thought I heard a phone

Dad and I play ball
Wonder of it all
I wish he could call

Sherry handed me a stone

Bible in hand
A golden wedding band
All just drops of sand

Vixen chases her bone

Precious few words to say
I miss her everyday
Since she went away

Paul drops his ice cream cone

Time is planned
I leave for another land
Hour glass with out sand

Johnny is home alone

Preacher takes the fall
Talks to God for one and all
I pray for the phone call

Warden pulls the switch




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11-05-2004 Chelsea Armstrong    

*smiles softly* Some how I managed to let this one slip my view in the past. This is an amazing write Walt..as is all of your works. It was breath taking for me as I waited to come around your next curve, to see what happens next. Great job my friend.
02-05-2004 Moses Hochstetler    

Outstanding way of leading up to the final moment. Flashbacks, deep thoughts, dying hope.
Great writing, Walt.

Moses
02-03-2004 Debra Rose    

Ignore Wayne...I think it is absolutely AMAZING! Even the second time, it makes me absolutely breathless. Still leaves me shock and gives me chills. Wonderful job, Walt!!! A horribly sad, and thought provoking, look into the mind of a deathrow inmate (well..previously inmate...now jsut....dead...yah <.< O.o .)

Forever,
Debra
01-23-2004 Wayne Thomas    

A good surprise ending to a fairly well done poem, but alas, the triple rhymes just don't do it for me. Sorry.
01-23-2004 Kay Lee Kelly    

Yikes!!! Just when I was feeling sorry for the guy,,,, then you do not know what to think or feel...Outstanding!!!!!
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