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Night Lines
by Nancy Pawley
copyright 01-21-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Night Lines

I rub my bloodshot bleary eyes, tired of killing time
while the ancient Trailways Bus just keeps moving forward
through A-List avenues of lingering sorrow, silent rage

Harsh blues howl past narrow-banded windows
Fluorescent lights form aggravating shapes
Darksome melody creations in the crackling sky

You rise and stretch, walk down the aisle; leave your satchel on the seat
I wait to see if you’ll return, but I hear the front door close
Curiosity’s aphrodisiac, I unclasp the metal hinges

Your lines of poetry move me, exoneration rules the night
Lavender tendrils curling round my heart and soul
I drown in beauty’s tender love, still swimming in my tears




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06-06-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

You have a wonderful way with words and I love reading your work, Anthony


02-08-2004 Caitlin Mazur    

I found this a bit confusing. Nancy, may you explain thsi to me?


02-05-2004 Moses Hochstetler    

Nancy, this was simply beautiful - filled with brilliant lines and phrases:
"Darksome melody creations in the crackling sky"
" Lavender tendrils curling round my heart and soul - I drown in beauty’s tender love, still swimming in my tears" - a wonderful free verse.

Moses


01-25-2004 Joan Jotz    

Wonderful imagery, imaginative descriptions...
"...Curiosity's aphrodisiac..." Woven like a beautiful tapestry.
Joan


01-23-2004 Wayne Thomas    

What can I say? As close to a masterpiece as I have read. Great stuff; keep it up. Wayne


01-23-2004 Doreen Reynolds    

I expect you find inspiration wherever you are.

Very interesting. Doreen


01-22-2004 Jack Curson    

A very touching write. Lovely. The one you right this for, I hope they appreciate it. Beautifully emotional.


01-22-2004 Christopher Doss    

Very good poem with a unique setting


01-21-2004 Lyle Berry    

I loved the images this poem conjured up and the mood it set with such clever story-like approach in so few lines. Wonderful write, Nancy!
Warm Regards,
Lyle


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