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Hotel Onyx
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 01-26-2004


Age Rating: 7 to 127

  Hotel Onyx
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Welcome to the Hotel were your deepest darkest fantasies become a reality, you desires are it's wish.
Each room leading to a differen't desire, door after door, room after room, turning you inside out, driving you upside down, turning your world around and around, taking hold and never letting go, this muct be the Hotel of your dreams.
Deeper it seems to get, driving you insane, hurting for the better with pain. fairies racing, mermaids swimming, hearts connecting, with the beat that is breaking, turning around, going upside down, making no sense. Creatures from the beyond running in sight, sweat dripping with a bite, Oceans glowing as far as I can see, butterflys flying fiercly, with all of your dreams and wishes coming true, connecting as one, loving you to.
Room after room,
door after door,
differen't fantasies,
differen't desires.
Go with your flow,
do your own thing,
live it all wild.
Hope you enjoyed your stay at the hotel of dreams.
Thank you and come again!
Love,
Hotel Onyx




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05-09-2006 Leigh G.    

Short one-line comments like that make we want to cry... Anyhow, this poem was...haunting. Perfection and me really don't get along, so Hotel Onyx isn't my place. If there's no pain or sadness, why would we be happy? Complex thought I could invoke if I kept chattering about that. This poem was pretty good, just held bad bad spelling and grammar. Good work, keep writing.

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02-21-2004 Jenny Stein    

i like the idea behind it.
02-08-2004 Emily Garwood    

veery nice their an opening in the hotel? lol good work paul!!!
02-04-2004 Debra Rose    

the hotel onyx sounds wonderful and absolutely dizzying in its perfection. Wonderful job, Paul. You're right, I did like it :)
02-01-2004 Caitlin M.    

Sounds like a cool place. But, a little too perfect, lol.
01-29-2004 Jessica M.    

this is really good paul! keep on writing!
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