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Twosome
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 01-31-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
(Tanka)

Tearful dance with you...
Filled with ardent whispering
And honeyed sighing,

Nights dance is crying slowly,
That strange dance with destiny...




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08-30-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Happy tears, holding hands with fate
Dancing with our dreams held tight

This is how I feel when I read your words
so craftily laid, so prettily paced
so perfectly traced the vision you relay!
05-29-2004 Walter Jones    

When I meassure sucess, I need only look at your feelings laid to page. Excellent Write.. Walt
05-08-2004 Lyle Berry    

"Night's dance is crying slowly"...so exquisite in its expression and poignant beauty...this is Ira at her best poetry...loved it...

Warm hugs,
Lyle
03-27-2004 Nancy Pawley    

Irina,
your last line says it all. None of us knows what destiny holds for us as we learn life's dance.
Nancy
03-10-2004 Gregory Christiano    

This is simply perfect Irina. Filled with such wonderous words and feelings. Outstanding piece of work.
02-05-2004 Moses Hochstetler    

This is beautiful, Ira - a wonderful Tanka, filled with sweet exchanges and expressions of love and deep feeling.

Best wishes,
Moses
02-03-2004 Joan Jotz    

Hi Irina, How are you?
I get the emotion of this piece, but stumble on some of the words...'and honey of sigh'?...
'And honeyed sighing' flows a bit better.
So good to read you again!
Joan
02-02-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Awesome write
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