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Under the stone
by Irina Guschina (Age: 53)
copyright 02-06-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Under a heavy stone,
Under a silent stone,
Under a somber stone,
Under a sage-green stone,
I will hide all my sorrow.


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08-30-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

If things be mentioned twice to remind and thrice to emphasize...then four times will permanently brand the thought in our memory. :-) What else can I say, Irina, that everyone else has not already? Great job.


07-26-2004 Misty Montier    

you can feel the weight of this stone (the sorrow)getting heavier, harder to lift up you go along. Short, concise and powerful.


05-19-2004 Walter Jones    

I extend my hand together we can lift the stone, no need to hide only live the glory of the sunshine. All things will pass, no sorrow is as great as that self inflicted. Walt


03-27-2004 Nancy Pawley    

Irina, I've lived most of my life hiding all my emotions underneath a massive stone..your poem really hit home with me.
Nancy


03-15-2004 Aaron Schmookler    

As ever, Irina, your writing is spare, elegant, touching and beautiful. You've employed repetition to great effect, and surprised me with your journey's end.


03-11-2004 Christopher Doss    

I've been trying to decide if this is a poem of hope, hiding sorrow in order to move on...or an admission of deep pain that you hide from the world. I am thinking the second option, but then I might just be pulling from my own experiences. I felt sad reading it. I hope all is well in your world.

Chris


03-10-2004 Gregory Christiano    

Exellent as usual Irina. Bury our sorrows and burdens under a heavy stone, so they won't come back to hound us!


02-11-2004 Moses Hochstetler    

Powerfully worded, Ira. Sounds like the stone I carry around with me all the time! It can get very heavy sometimes, but thank God, there are lighter moments, too.

Best wishes,
Moses


02-09-2004 Doreen Reynolds    

Short and to the point. Needs no more words.

Doreen


02-07-2004 Nancy Pawley    

To be able to hide sorrow this way; wonderful write, Irina.
Nancy


02-07-2004 Joan Jotz    

Heavy with emotion, simply yet deeply expressed.
Lovely, Irina!
***Joan***


02-06-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem Irina. So sad though especially the last line.
Toni S.


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