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Thursday
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 08-05-2004


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Thursday I ran,
The words you said were to much,
Running the motorway,
Tears blinding the way.

Couldn't think straight,
For what you said went straight to my head,
Running in the darkness...
For once wasn't comforting.

All she see's are the baggy trousers,
A t-shirt so black,
Spiked collars and bracelets,
Lip pierced too.

Heavy metal blaring,
You hate my style, the way I look,
But I'm not what you think,
I'm just trying to be me.

But now my head's spinning,
And nothing makes sense,
As I crumble on the road,
I cry...and cry.

The dark just gets darker,
And I'm deeper in trouble,
Why can't I run away?
I just want to be safe from your words.

Please someone stop this,
I wish her words weren't true,
But when i'm alone,
I can't help but believe.




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08-04-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

It's hard to be who you are when you're not really sure who that is. It's hard to be you when everyone else has a vision of you that you don't yet see or are unable to. Just hang in there... it all gets a bit clearer as we get older... if not only because we formed who we are more solidly and care less what other's think. :-) (That's why old ladies wear purple, big fake flowers, and gaudy jewelry and get away with it... lol)
04-20-2004 Christopher Doss    

The last stanza is my favorite...
I'm wondering if line four should read "Tears blinding my way"
and on the third stanza, first line...see's should be sees
This is a very confusing age, fighting for independance yet still needing the nurturing. I hear your confusion and frustration loud and clear
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