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Someone Help Me
by Travis Bauer (Age: 21)
copyright 03-03-2004
Contest Winner

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  Someone Help Me
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I've always been the loving kind,
I'm just a really shy guy.
I want her more than I can show,
I just need some reassurance
That can make me love without holding back...

I've been dying to kiss her,
But I never got the feeling that it's right.
I can write all of these poems,
And never be able to do that which I write.
How is it I can write but never feel?

I need someone who can help me.
I can't live my life this way.
There has to be something I can do,
To show her I can't live without her,
To show her I love her...




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11-03-2004 Caitlin M.    




11-03-2004 Caitlin M.    

One word, awesome.
09-29-2004 Paula T.    

This is so totally worthy of a contest!
I'm not surprised you won, I'd be surprised if you hadn't won.
Great write, awesome feelings!
04-07-2004 Jenna T.    

Travis, this is awesome! I like the feeling in it! Keep writin!
Jenna T.
03-19-2004 Cortney Jaruzel    

Aww!! this is sooo cute. I wish someone felt that way about me. It'd be the best feeling left to feel. Great job.
03-09-2004 Leah Garrison    

bitterly beautiful poem.
an idea (one that I would love to be the recipient of anyway =^.^=):
write a poem. do not direct it towards her (e.g. do not put "you are the tempo by which my lifeblood pulses"), but instead write as though you had no intention of giving it to her. write as though she is stumbling upon your inner musings and you have no inkling of her listening presence. in order to save your neck in case all is not well, do not include things you would not wish to be spread all over.
then put it somewhere where she will find it but nobdy else will. and don't put it anywhere where it seems like you put it there like in her backpack or something cliche'd like that. if the discovery is on her part, it is much more pleasing when it comes to discovering sentiments.
hope this helps and wish you the best of luck!
=^.^=
03-04-2004 Debra Rose    

Travis,
Telling someone you love them or how you feel is the hardest thing you can do. If you need help, email me with the situation,a nd I can lend you hand. Not only am I chick (hehe) but i have experience with breaking to them how you feel, and also making the relationship last. I hope all goes well for you Travis. And Unrequited love, the most beautiful tradgedy of them all is something that can tear you apart. But be strong. Things will get better.
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