   03-12-2005 Sarah Mahler
Tee-hee. This is a very nice read for me. I think though that you did a great job on writing a nice haiku.
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  02-07-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Good thing this isn't long for I don't have time. Good job.Thanks, Anthony
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   12-15-2004 Andrew Findlay
I assume you're being ironic when you say you can't write a haiku, because this one was great. Also kind of funny because the subject matter juxtaposes(did I spell this right?)your obvious ability. I guess thats where the irony comes in...also I hope I hope I used all these fancy words properly because otherwise I'll look kind of foolish.
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10-11-2004 Paula T.
This is a simply wonderful haiku.
You cannot be more wrong!
You write haikus very well, and they rhyme, too!
I'm telliing you, you're truly talented.
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   09-24-2004 Len Mcintosh
Well, how about this? Not only a haiku, but it rhymes. Steffie, it seems that you can write a haiku. :) [A pretty good one, too.]
Len McIntosh
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   04-29-2004 Andrea Jeanette DiGiantomasso
This poem is singing
Perhaps haikus are too hard
And give us headaches.
I found it lovely,
Write more of the same for me,
Perhaps sestinas?
^_^ i give it a four. sw33t poem.
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04-03-2004 Leah Garrison
the irony is excellent.. great haiku.
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03-27-2004 Wayne Thomas
a nice funny to end the day with. keep pushin that ol pen!
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03-19-2004 Lisa Anderson
that was really good, funny too! haikus are cool becuase they are short and to the point which rocks! the idea for your is great! awesome creativity.
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03-13-2004 Adela Ruiz
Hehee awww thats not true. :P
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03-11-2004 Christopher Doss
You can write haiku, just don't try so hard..lol.
Walter, I agree with most of what you wrote here, except the keeps you out of trouble part..lol. I seem to do just fine even with the pen pushed
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