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My Silent Pain
by Lisa A. (Age: 17)
copyright 05-10-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
My pain is too great,
For you to understand,

You were much too busy,
To hold my hand,

I silently cried,
Though my tears were dried,

I was deeply hurt,
My pain amplified,

It only grew bigger,
But I kept it inside,

Then becuase of that,
My self esteem died...

I used to be lovely,
I used to be grand,

But now it is over,
I can barely stand,

All of my life,
I was put off to the side,

Often I wondered,
Would they care if I died?

My silent pain is still here,
Will it ever leave,

Times of happiness,
My mind does deceive,

So I put on a smile,
And do my best,

So I can leave my mind,
To a peaceful rest!


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06-27-2006 Erin G.    

hey Lisa!

I know this is an older poem of yours, but I enjoyed it all the same. I liked how you rhymed the sections together, and I liked the overall message. Great poem!

xoxo erin
01-24-2005 Paula T.    

wow.
I would just like to say, although you will probably not believe me, that I am going through a similar pain and I held it inside and it caused a break down in the middle of class, which led to the guidance counsleor, which led to mom, which led to questions, after which I answered left a week home to "cool off" ( HA! ) which is why I'm home right now going stark raving mind, leaving me nothing to do but comment my head off!!!!!
Maybe it's not the exact same pain, but your words expressed what I was feeling, and you do not know how much that helped!
So, you are not alone, and I can relate!!!

It's cool to know somebody understands as well as you do!

Later!
04-23-2004 Wayne Thomas    

When you make your reader share your pain, you've made it as a poet. This one could do with a good edit, but I like it. Feel better soon--I guess we've all been there.
04-03-2004 Rissa T.    

I understand those feelings. Just keep a laugh always inside your heart and you'll feel better.
03-13-2004 Adela Ruiz    

Reminds me of depression. I go through that often, but you know life is too short to hold on to the bad things. Work for yourself and it becomes better. Thats what I think at least. Good work.
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