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LOL!!! This is a really cute poem. Be carefull when eating pickles you wouln't want to get ill would you? I don't have to worry about getting ill because pickles don't agree with my taste buds and stomach:( Oh well. Keep up the good work.
Toni Sweeney
This pome is funny. I love it. The picture is cool. StarBurst Loves your pome and pickure too. I think your pome does not need any work at all. The fish and OrEo Love it as well. It's beat is perfect.
Lol!!! I really enjoyed your poem and the pic that went with it. The poem was so funny. :) Keep up the good work. Email me when you have more posted.
Toni S.
Lisa,
This was really cute! I absolutely adore the picture you posted with it! A few minor grammatical erros though...
Mouth watering crunch,
That gives my mouth thrill,
maybe try ,
Mouth watering crunch,
gives my mouth a thrill,
Omitting the 'that' makes it flow a bot better in my opinion!
Its crisp cold,
That gives me a chill,
Put an apostrophe on 'its' to make it it's and maybe even throw an and between crisp and cold.
Aside from that, a very good job! I'm no big fan of pickles but maybe I should go give one a try!
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