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The way I tend to feel about things is that if you want to do something stupid that will harm yourself, go right ahead. Smoking, I feel, is included in that. But its the things that destroy nature which I do not like, and the way every bashes everybody else! It makes me so mad to see those things going on in everyday life, especially when they start at such a young age. Everyone at school has to bash everyone else about something.. I just sit back and watch. That's what has led me to be such a relaxed person generally. Of course, I am stressed by those oh-too-soon deadlines and whatnot, but not the people. That's the way several friends of mine and myself all are, we just stand around and watch. But I think smoking is up to the person (I'm always around smokers), I think drinking is up to the people (I sure know some fun drunks ^_^), and drugs are okay if it is like Marijuana but only if it is limited and you don't become hooked. Oh well, I can't change the world, at least not yet. ;-) I simply have to wait until I'm such a good speaker that people will all listen to me, then come the seminars! Mwahaha!
Your poem is very true. I often ask myself "What is the world coming to?" People take our world for granted. They pollute and they don't realize that they are not only destroying the world, but they are destroying themselves and others. It's ashame what people do. Like smoking, so many people do it, all over the world, all the time. If we all stopped or at least cut down smoking, I think the world would be a cleaner and healthier place.
I still don't think people aren't getting the concept that this is a free verse poem. There is little polishing it up. Yes, I have the comparisons hidden within' the poem. I am comparing the world and politics!
so true, politics are what kill us. I think God knew it was gonna happen, and sat back and watched, tweaking it occaisionally. still, i love the poem, but the lines are a bit choppy. i give it a two, but polish it up and it could be a five piece! really powerful theme.
LOL! Buddy, this was so great! I think it was the ending line that really got me. Socrates said something like that once. "If you wish to make a difference and never become corrupt, then avoid politics at all costs."
i like the way you see things, but are you comparing it with something? its good but it would give a clearer picture if your understanding if you gave more detail and examples
Haha! I really love the last line! You have no idea how right you are! I blame the condition of the world on politics!!! And for the record, if God did want the world to be like this, then he must be getting one hell of a show! Good job!
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