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Last Cry, the next chapter
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 03-15-2004


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
One last cry,
deep inside,
holding back into the night,
keeping you behind this darkness,
instead of following your heart,
you do what your told.
One last cry,
a tear from inside,
shinning through the crystal clear blue sky.
Let's start a new beginning,
for this has become the next chapter.




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05-22-2006 Leigh G.    

Woops! Forgot praise...here you go.... So forgetful! Did you once know I think I did one of these forgot-praise comments and forgot it again? XD Yeah I know, forgetful...


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05-22-2006 Leigh G.    

This is a good piece in the long run. Let's hope this is your last cry...wait, you've posted too much for that. :p I wasn't trying to be mean keep in mind, just joking. ;) I've spent too much time with the girls in my manga club I think... Anyhow, you've got some you form issues, and same goes for capitalization, but this is a good piece all the same. Good work, keep writing.


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03-18-2004 Emily Garwood    

hey paul this is a good poem, the only corection i can see is in the 6th line down "your" should be "you're" part from that perfect!!!
Emy
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