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The traitor i once called 'friend'
by Tara M. (Age: 16)
copyright 04-11-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Why,how,can I feel so bad?
I was so happy,
you pulled me down,
now this face is marked with shame,
from the traitor I once called 'friend'

And from these eyes I tear your lies,
that blinded me for so long,
I can't believe,I do believe,
and at the end I feel upset,
by the traitor I once called 'friend'

As a team you hurt me,
and slandered me,
just for popularity,
and alternativly you are hurt,
because you're the traitor I once called 'friend'
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I had a punch-up in the middle of the street with a girl older than me because my supposed-to-be best friend and her friend told her i'd been saying things i did not say and then her mates started laughing which is why i wrote this.




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04-06-2004 Toni Sweeney    

hope you get it to the front soon.
Toni S.


03-29-2004 Madeline C.    

A deep poem.I have to deal with this stuff,too.ALOT.It hurts,but writing poems and stories about it helps...and thats exactly what you did!Great job!


03-18-2004 Travis Bauer    

I got a lot of stuff like that going on, so you can talk to me about it if ya want to. It was an awesome write.
Travis B.


03-18-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Hi Tara,
I'm with Steffie this is a real powerful write. I hate it when people say bad stuff that you really didn't say. I'm gald u told us though :)


03-17-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

Tara,
This is a very powerful write. Funny how it matches my current mood but... heh... we won't go there.. O.o... anyways, you've done a marvelous job and never forget about good ole Karma.. your ex-friend will get her just deserts.

~Steffie~


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