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Why I Love You
by Travis Bauer (Age: 21)
copyright 04-16-2004
Contest Winner

Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
You ask me why I love you.
Do you really wanna know?
Baby, the list goes on and on.
So have a seat, this may take a while.

I love your eyes,
How they shine in the moonlight.
I love your smile,
And the breath it takes away.

Is that enough to say?
I didn't think so.
I'm glad it's not,
I want you to know how much I love you.

I love your face,
So gentle and smooth.
I love your waist,
And how smoothly it curves.

Still not enough?
That's good.
I'm just getting started.
When I'm finished, you'll know all my reasons.

I love your hair,
The way it blows in the summer breeze.
I love your laugh,
How it's always full of spirit.

I love the way you kiss,
The sweetness of your lips.
I love your touch,
When we are holding each other close.

I love your voice,
When you whisper in my ear.
I love your sincerity,
That always gives me comfort.

Well honey, I've got a lot left.
You want to know how much I love you,
So I'm gonna let you know.
I'm letting you into my heart.

I love the way you hold me,
All through the night.
I love the comfort you give me,
In times of insecurity.

I love the way you make me feel,
Whenever I'm feeling down.
I love how you show your love,
For me and for others.

I love everything about you.
I could just go on with words,
But, words aren't enough to show you
How deeply in love I am with you.

There's nothing about you
That I do not love.
I hope you realize this,
I want you and only you.

I hope you got what you wanted.
These are the reasons I love you,
And why I'll love only you.
Now you know why, I love you...




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09-20-2006 Denise Johnson    

This is a lovely poem. I really like it, it's so thoughtful and conveys such love.

I wish someone would write something like for me!

Well done.

p.s I would of given you some praise points but I'm low due to being away from the site for nearly 2 years.
09-09-2005 Alma H.    

Greatly done.No wonder it was a contest winner.
04-10-2004 Leah Garrison    

beautifully done! whoever is on the receiving end of this poem is very special, and the inspiration for such a marvelous poem can only be angelic.
=^.^=
04-06-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Great poem travis. Youd did an awesome job on this poem. Like Doug said this truely came from the heart. It must of took a long time to write this poem. It is so long and good. Keep up the awesome work.
Toni S.
04-05-2004 Doug Carlson    

This poem is the best that I have read. This truely came from the heart. You are very lucky to have someone who you know will be there for you
04-03-2004 Leah Garrison    

oh wow oh wow oh wow...
just some minor scratches:
line 14: smooth (no e).
line 28: each other (two words).
line 31: sincerity (forgot n).
line 40: insecurities (switch r and u).
line 43: missing a word (I guess it's "you").
line 51: realize (one l).
email me when corrected and I'll recommend sch a lovely poem!
04-03-2004 Joan Jotz    

Travis,
Having problems getting my comments posted. I had another suggestion that did not come through.
The line "In times of my inscurities" reads awkward. Why not change it to something like;
"When I feel insecure." or "In times of insecurity."

~*~Joan~*~
04-03-2004 Victoria Medley    

Reallize should also be realize. Other than that (and sincerity which Joan pointed out) I don't see any mistakes.

This poem really expresses your emotions for this girl, and I find it incredibly sweet. Whoever you wrote it for is very luck. Keep up the good work~
04-02-2004 Joan Jotz    

Travis,
Now you're letting your emotions out. This is expressive and tender and honest.
Make a few corretions:
sicerity---> sincerity
04-02-2004 Jenny Stein    

i like love.
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