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Icelocked
by Wayne Thomas (Age: 58)
copyright 06-27-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Bevies of boats,
Atlantic dories,
spray-drenched,icicled,
decks aglisten with salt,
stacked one on one,
hibernate four high
on gravel shore.

Three trawlers,
one so old it has a steam engine
and a big black stack,
sit frozen,
locked in ice,
in the inner harbor.

Gray-and-white smoke
plumes
from the fishermen's homes,
several clapboard houses,
a log cabin--built from a kit,
a shingled cottage,
two modern brick bungalows,
and a rambling thing
with blue aluminum siding.

The lighthouse keeper
has left tracks
across the ice,
and there,
halfway across
the frozen channel,
is a bag of lollipops
dropped from his groceries.

Last night the church burned down,
and all day
a sheriff's car has sat out front,
guarding
the ashes.


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02-18-2005 David Pekrul    

You have described Atlantic Canada so well, especially the shores of Newfoundland. Although I am a 'landlubber', I can picture the scene.

Good write,
David Pekrul


07-04-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

My grandfather used to be a fisherman, and that is the extent of my knowledge of fishing. His hat glittered with lures and his hands smelled of fish. His eyes lit up when you pretended to be interested in his fish tales, especially the BIG one that got away. Thank you for reminding me of a wonderful man I once knew.


04-25-2004 John Durler    

Excellent poem of a nautical nature in ice cold weather. The imagery is well done the site believable, the diction excellent, the phrasing good, however this poem will stand stronger without the middle detailed descriptions.


04-12-2004 Aaron Schmookler    

Nice work, this. I like the litanny of boats, giving pictographic context for an unexpected, but beautiful ending.


04-04-2004 Joan Jotz    

Hi Wayne,
this is wonderful, full of imagery, and sights for the senses. I like the free verse, it's strong and vivid, a well written piece.

~*~Joan~*~


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