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ack... I tried to correct the last line of my comment... but the darned thing wouldn't let me.... what I meant to say was..... When a poet can bring unfamiliar sensations to the reader then they have achieved the highest rank of creative expression.... there.... I feel better now... :P And again... this is an amazing write!!
THis surely is a taste of Autumn! As Joan says, you appeal to the reader's every sense and truely bring them the season no matter when or where they are! Living in an excruciatingly hot desert for the better part of my life, I've never truely had the chance to experiance such a lovely passing of season. Your descriptions have the power to show me, though I've never been through it. When a poem can bring unfamiliar sensations to a reader then they have complete and total talent! Beautifully done!
~Steffie~
btw-... I wonder what the geese really *are* saying to eachother.... O.o
Hi Wayne,
Wonderfully descriptive piece, I like the style. You've captured all he senses for the reader...sight, smell, hearing, feeling, taste. This is a postcard for the reader to enjoy.
Welcome !
