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To Be Her
by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18)
copyright 05-10-2004

Age Rating: 7 to 127

Trying to be her
Is such a pain,
The work is so intense
But still I strive,
To be my best
And now it starts to make sense,
I sing my best
And play guitar,
But still the work is tense
To be like her,
Is very hard
Now to finish the suspense.

This poem IS suppose to feel as if it is not done.**

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08-08-2004 Caitlin M.

Trust me your not alone. I feel this way about other girls too. And besides under her skin she may not be all that cool.

04-08-2004 Paul Kangas

Hey,
I think your better off being yourself :)
Very good write, I liked this one.

04-06-2004 Joan Jotz

Hi Lisa,
Well, you did a good job leaving the reader suspended, anticipating the next line. An interesting work. You might want to delete some of those commas;
"Trying to be her
Is such a pain,
The work is so intense,
But still I strive
To be my best,
And now it starts to make sense."

It just flows better. (try reading it out loud.)

~*~Joan~*~

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To Be Her by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18) copyright 05-10-2004 Age Rating: 7 to 127

To Be Her
by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18)
copyright 05-10-2004

Age Rating: 7 to 127