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Not alone...
by Paul Kangas (Age: 18)
copyright 04-21-2004
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Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Its not my fault I 'm here! I didn 't do anything wrong!
I know I didn 't. Dr. Cruz says I'll be out of here soon but I doubt it. Personally I think he is lying, just to make me feel better.
I 'm in here because of him. He did this to me, all of it. He killed my friends, gutted them one by one, leaving me behind to see the horror, to see the body parts, to see things I couldn't even imagine. His case still remians open, he was never caught, never found, but I think hes coming for me, and nothing is holding him back. I lay on my bed thinking about my past. I simply can 't help but to get his image out of my mind. I couldn't look at his face, I just couldn 't... he was wearing my boyfriends face for a mask. I feel lucky that I escaped, and still alive, but yet I wish I were still dead. Im stuck here in this Psych Ward, all alone. My family doesn 't want me, no one wants me.
You know how sometimes you sort of feel shivers crawling up the tip of your spine? I believe those are supernatural forces, good or evil, and in this case I think its evil. Sometimes I think he is dead, maybe alive, but I see his image a lot, after midnight, as the bell rings. Maybe I am crazy, losing my mind, but what if I am not. What if someone is trying to warn me, that he is coming, but why does he want me?
Think, think, think I thought to myself. Why would he want me? what does he want with me? I started to panic but calmed myself down and tried to force myself to sleep.
I looked into the mirror, suddenly gasping as I saw the image of a cut up bleeding girl behind me, looking into me. I turned around jumping back, slamming onto the wall, hardly breathing.
"He wants you because... your his sister... " she said faintly. Suddenly I remembered her, she was reported missing not to long ago... why she was one of his victims!
"Wait " I cried pushing myself towards her as she dissapeared! That wasn't the first time I had seen her.
I saw her ghost before, roaming through the hallways at night.
I remembered I was adopted at a young age, so that means he was my birth brother? I felt something in me saying get out, get out, get out! I knew something big was about to happen. I looked out my window, starting to panic as I saw him walking right through the door downstairs! it was him alright!
"HELP ME" I screamed! My heart pounding, my head sweating, I started crying, pounding my fist on the door.
Suddenly the ghost girl opened the door to set me free, then dissapeared again. I ran out as fast as I could, knowing that he was there catching up, near by me. I ran through the hallway, down the stairs, running like the wind through the darkness. Oh no! There was a dead end! The door was locked, I tried to push it open, but couldn't. There it was totally pitch black. Loud breathing raced through the hallways, as screeching screeched. It were almost as I heard the devil speaking. Louder it got, scratching in the walls, as they shook. I saw him coming towards me. I cried and panic. I saw my boyfriends face on him. The door then opened, I ran further, not looking back at the horror, I ran for my life!
I then stopped looking in front of me, downstairs i saw something else, something more horrible. A man in a tuxedo looking back at me with his dark pitch black eyes started laughing such a horrible laugh, something that I couldn't even imagine! The fire in his eyes wasn't even humid, it was more than evil, it was worse than anything I ever thought of. His skin started heating up, then he blew up with his face flying to me, it exploded, I ran the opisite way. Somebody help me, somebody help me, somebody help me! I soon saw her, another patient at the psych ward, Kelly.
"Kelly" I cried! She didn 't look the same. She looked rather disturbing.
"HES COMING AND THERE IS NOTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT IT, NOTHING! HES NOT GONNA STOP UNTIL HE RIPS YOU APART" she laughed, but she wasn't her. She was possessed! She put her arms out and started laughing as cuts ripped her skin open, her eyes turned red, evil red. Her head spun around in circles. I looked back and saw him right in front of me looking into my eyes. I was more than scared, more than frightened. He looked into my eyes again, breathing heavly.
"LORD HELP ME! LORD HELP ME" I cried screaming!
I woke up crying and screaming, kicking, and shoving!
The nurse put a shot in me. I saw Dr. Cruz looking at me.
"Hes coming, hes coming, hes coming" I screamed!


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08-14-2004 Paula T.    

Oh, silly me! I forgot to give you praise points!
I apologize. Here you go,I'm really sorry, I'm forgetful these days!



08-13-2004 Paula T.    

Wow. I got chills! Check for spelling and grammar , but other than that, it is a perfect story! You did your job!


06-01-2004 Anne W.    

This was chilling and spooky. It leaves you so confused and scared... you did your job as a horror writer. As Christopher said, read through and check for spelling, grammar, and capitalization mistakes. Otherwise it was very well done!

~*anne*~


04-21-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Wow Paul!!! This is your best story yet. I just loved how you started the beginning. That was so awesome. The story IS your best horror story yet. The ending also is awesome. I can not wait till you write your next one. You have a few spelling mistakes in the story. Use charlie to find them. I am going to have nightmares now. :O Your imagery is so awesome. Keep up the awesome work.
Moony


04-19-2004 Christopher Doss    

You have a very vivid imagination! This is one of your best horror pieces I think..it grips the attention well. What I would like to see, and I say this as a friend, is for you to go back and do a slow read through. Clean up some spelling and grammar errors. This will take you one step further into creating a really good piece. Although, grammar isn't my best subject either..lol...if you need help please email and I will be glad to help out.
Keep writing!
Chris


04-15-2004 Stefanie Mendoza    

Paul,
This is absolutely the best work I've seen from you since I've been on this site! I love the twisted plot and the frantic set of mind the charater is in. Deliciously chilling and creepy! Wow... everything flows smoothy even though the speaker is scattered in her manic thoughts. And I love the way the end is left open for the reader! The very stuff nightmares are made of!! Wonderful!!

~Steffie~


04-15-2004 Rissa T.    

... ... ... ... spooky...


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