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Soul Window
by Leah Garrison (Age: 20)
copyright 04-12-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
When I look into your eyes
I see the world spread out before me

When I look into your eyes
You're all I've always never dreamed of

When I look into your eyes
I see a fire that burns so brightly

When I look into your eyes
I see there's nothing there but love


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09-01-2005 Leigh G.    

This is a really awesome love poem. You should do more love poems they are your strong point. No spelling mistakes too added bonus. I like how you use eyes as a way to read some one. My love poems suck, but you are a great at'em.
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09-10-2004 Paula T.    

WOW!
I can sort-of imagine this mysterious someone, and only through your describing poetry...
You mentioned that you write poetry about Richsrd...Is this poem about him?
08-08-2004 Doreen Reynolds    

Eyes are the windows of the soul.
04-19-2004 Jessica M.    

i have no clue what or who this is about...... but i guess thats the art or poetry! lol. anyway, this is really good!
04-15-2004 Andrea Jeanette DiGiantomasso    

I admit-- is this about a person, or God? I think it applies to both... I always dream of speaking with God and looking in His eyes-- I've been thinking about it a lot more lately, which could lead to my pondering... but either way, it's lovely. I said to someone else that the power of a poem's line is in the last word-- maybe you should change the "of" in line 4? it will effect the rhyme scheme but perhaps this requires free verse... still, a lovely poem. I give it a 4. ^_^
04-13-2004 Tara M.    

Good!Tells us about the person through their eyes and the title suits!
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