05-31-2005
Kat Kamiya
a really good poem
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05-29-2005
Mika Lee
This is a really cute poem, I always have trouble making a poem rhyme. Good work!
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01-19-2005
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
I did not really like kids untill my grandkids got here. Now I think they are great. This is a very cute poem. I like it a lot! Thanks, Anthony
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09-06-2004
Gregory Christiano
Delightful lyrics and a lilting style. Love to hear this put to music. It was made for it.
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08-31-2004
Anna Lemons
Very good! Teachers are special people and you really capture the special relationship between the student and teacher. I enjoyed reading this very much.
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08-06-2004
Jackie Edwards
Very good poem! ^__^ Nicely written!
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07-22-2004
Emily Garwood
nice poem written good sounds like yopu and the little kids have a real bond....i did work experiance in the nursery school i had so much fun with all the kids so i can relate to this poem!!! nice one!!!
Emy
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07-22-2004
Lisa Anderson
i love this poem! it reminds me a lot of my aunt and cousin who are teachers of around the same age group. children at that age are so young and innocent, and i can rememeber when i was that young as well. i just loved my teachers! good job! =)
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07-11-2004
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
I did daycare off and on for ten years before opening my own group day care home. I ran that business for another twelve years with such success that some parents refused to relocated even when threated with loss of employment due to an inability to find adequate child care elsewhere. I had a waiting list longer than some of the tales I wove with the children, and THAT was pretty long! ;-)
I do so love children and sometimes in the shopping center I hear, "Miss Mary!" only to turn around and be greeted by a six foot three grown male ... and his family! Now, THAT makes me feel old!... Old but great!
I will be "Miss Mary" until the day I die and children flock to me like the pied piper wherever I go. I most definitely understoon your work! Thank you for the smile.
As for the construction of the poem, well... at some points it seems to flow, and at others it's a bit choppy. I've read poems that are either, or...but not both. *shrug* Or maybe that's what you wanted? Email me if you want more. :-) And continue to love children. They are our future!
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05-19-2004
Katie Langolf
i was interning as a PE coach's assistant. i'm not any more because i'm graduating.
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05-19-2004
Katie Langolf
Come on, people, Please comment.
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05-19-2004
Jessica May
awe this is SOOOOOOO good!!! its really cute and yeah. you're a teacher? thats awesome!!
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