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Crystal clear
by Tara M. (Age: 15)
copyright 09-24-2004


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
You may not remember your dreams,
but I see them clearly,
And you try to forget,try to escape the fear,
but it will always be there,
always be with you,

You may not see the message,
although clearly written on the wall,
further down you push your depression,
further down in your heart,
but it will always be there,
always be with you,

You do not see me,
you do not see your fate,
so you leave your world and soul behind,
but it will always be there,
always be with you,

I will not tell you,
I can only warn you,
that if you ignore your fear your world will die,
but you ignore me, ignore your fear,
and I will always remain there,
haunting your mind!


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02-10-2005 Angela Toshner    

oh no I see your dues are late. If you can tell me how long you have maybe I can find the money to pay for them. Your a great poet. I dont want to see that wasted.
09-29-2004 Angela Toshner    

THis is a very good write. Man I wish I could have done this good when I was 12. I like this mostly because of the last line. It kind of makes you think and that is a good thing. Great job!!
05-13-2004 Joan Jotz    

Tara,
A very good write, intriguing, mysterious, and yes, haunting. Very well expressed and accented by the repetition in each stanza. Wonderful!

~*~Joan~*~
05-10-2004 Andrea Jeanette DiGiantomasso    

very powerful, very lingering... the lines were so elegant, Regina's right, it is haunting. good work tara! (YOU'RE 11??!?? WOW!!!!)
05-05-2004 Regina S.    

Creepy! :) nice haunting effect! Just put a space in the last stanza between 'me,' and 'ignore'.
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