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forever inspired
by Sage B.
copyright 05-18-2005


Age Rating: 4 to 127

 
When I look in the mirror
I see who I want to be
But I fear

When I look in a puddle
I see ispiration
I see someone to cuddle
I feel frustration

When I see you in real life
I feel love, but jealousy
So much strife
Because I don't want to be me

When I think hard
I figure you inspire me
So without trying or regard
You inspire me to work hard to be
An even better me


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04-30-2006 Jessica P.    

Wow great job! Jealousy can be dangerous, but you can always use it to your advantage, too, by working harder and improving. Great job!
06-14-2005 Roger Crique    

Sage, I think you did a wonderful job trying to express the frustration that a lot of people feel when it comes to their self image. Mind you, I said trying to express, this means that some of your expressions are a bit vague, but I tell you what, it works! It lends the poem an even greater frustration. Sometimes we hate who we are and would love to be someone else, but in the long run, God is smart enough not to make mistakes, so be happy with who you are and only change if it's for the better.
05-20-2005 Tina Z.    

Oh-oh, spelling mistake! Don't worry about it but you put down "ispiration", I guess you forgot the "n". I think this poem is good, but it could use a little bit more work and feeling. Overall, it is great! Write on!
05-13-2004 Joan Jotz    

Hi Sage,
I like the contradiction of feeling in this poem......sure but unsure at the same time. Nicely written.

~*~Joan~*~
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