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Debra Rose
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Love of My Undoing
by Debra Rose (Age: 21)
copyright 06-23-2004


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
You taste sweet,
Like butterschotch and
Mullberries
Absinthe and
Amphetamine.
A sweet zypher soothing over
My paradoxical analogies.
My escape from the living.
The protector of my dead.
The destroyer of my ghosts.
Standing tall
A crucifex never seen
An edifice which never crumbled
An image that always remained,
You were the giver of pain
Of nothing.
You were my suicide fortress.



This was --Untitled-- but Kira P. helped me come up with a title! ALL MUST FEEL ETERNAL LOVE FOR HER!! Bwahahahahahahahahahaha! *coughs*

copyright© Debra Rose 2004


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07-26-2004 Misty Montier    

Everyone has a distinct style, and there's definitely no mistakening your's. You works has such a real, emotional, and dare I say melancholy tone that is unmistakably Debra Rose. Powerful imagery.
07-05-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Reminds me of Edwin McCain's I'LL BE. This is an emotional piece.
06-17-2004 Gregory Christiano    

Macabre as ever. Sounds like a trip I had on LSD way back in the 60's. The imagry is vivid and very stirring. You have the gift of stirring the emotions, ripping into the core of an emotion and lay it bare! Excellent.
06-10-2004 Walter Jones    

Title: "I Called You Friend".
Other: Excellent protrail of a traitor, Walt
06-09-2004 Amanda Benham    

Wow its been a while, but i thought id check in and see how ur doing! I really liked this poem, Deb, your use of words is always fantastic.
06-01-2004 Emily Garwood    

Very interesting poem with good use of words ^-^` basically...i really liked it lol it was really good shame it has no title you'll have to come up with one!!! (eventually)
Emy
05-24-2004 Victoria Medley    

I love the use of opposites in this poem, very cool. I reminds me a lot of Euthanasia by Lord Byron. (A poem I adore)
05-19-2004 Joan Jotz    

Hi Deb!!
I like the caustic concept, and how you portray your dilema to the reader. Good comparisons...sweet vs, bitter, strength vs. weakness, life vs. death. Well written piece.

~*~Joan~*~
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