Princess of Raindrops
by
Paul Kangas
(Age: 18)
copyright 07-20-2004
Age Rating: 4 to 127
Tears in the sky
Do they cry?
An old myth says
That when the raindrops
burst from the sky
The Angels have cried
For someone good has Died
Tears crying in the sky.
Does the pain and suffering end?
Have the ones who died gone to hell?
Will the tears ever stop
But yet I saw it all.
The princess in the middle of the dark street
dancing in the rain
Like an Angel
Which shined with beauty.
She had a heart of gold
Never to be taken.
Just her and only her
She stepped into the rain
And somehow it all went away
The Angels smiled as the sun came out
The butterflies flew
The birds sang
The Princess of Raindrops shined across
The sky.
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Now half bad. It's a huge improvement on presentation and grammar than your earlier works. I may not be a Christan, but I still enjoyed reading this poem. It's meaningful, and I'm glad that you believe in your religion so fully. If it makes you happy, I don't have any problems. As long as nothing bad is suggested by the religion... Anyhow, this was a good poem and a large improvement. Good work, keep writing.
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