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Irreversible Effects
by
Jennifer Campbell-Kletzli
(Age: 20)
copyright 02-21-2006
Age Rating: 13 to 127
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Heat rises from the raging fire,
violent enough to take a life.
People are running, screaming for help.
Yet I can't stop.
The wind blows harshly,
attempting to slow me down.
But it's not working.
I can overcome it.
The anger deep inside my heart,
fuels my body so I continue to roar,
raining blows on those who come across my path.
Fear is the oil that runs through my veins.
As long as fear exists,
then so will I.
I'm so angry, I've forgotten what it was
that made me this way.
My heart burns eternally,
promising revenge on those who have done this to me.
Those who made me suffer will die,
Those who made me die will suffer,
Evil has overcome my body,
and it brings destruction to all who cross my path.
So I warn you now to back away,
or you'll perish too.
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02-21-2006 Tiffany Forster
-hands her some ice water and Ben and Jerrys Ice Cream-
I quite liked this, it really expresses a good (or bad...) feeling of hate and anger. I agree with Anthony, I do hope that writing this got it out of your system... I have to say that the "So long as fear exists, then so will I" line is my favorite. It is so true.... This reminds me of Harry Potter for some reason...-shiftyeyes- Its a good thing. Good write!
-hands her a strusel muffin-
Cheers!
Tiffany
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05-22-2004 Regina S.
Hehe, I know it's one of the most annoying things in the world, but um... there's this thing called poofreading! ^-~ hehe, jk. But you do have a few typo's - 1st line: 'ragng' -> 'raging', 11th line: 'wo' -> 'who', 18th line: 'promicing' -> 'promising' & last line (lost count! :p) 'pearish' -> 'perish'. Correct those and it'll be great! You expressed the passion and anger here very well. I especially like the line "Fear is the oil that runs through my veins.
As long as fear exists, then so will I." Many people don't realize if you fear something, even if it's the weakest thing in the world, you automatically give it power over you. Great write!
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