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Feeling
by Victoria Medley (Age: 20)
copyright 06-28-2004
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Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
This was originally a song, with quite an interesting melody. Maybe when I perfect it, you'll hear it on the radio. ^_~

[Chorus]
Do you ever feel,
that the world isn't round?
Do you ever feel,
that you're not on the ground?
Have you ever made,
a wish upon a star?
Do people really know,
exactly who you are?
Have you ever tried,
to reach for the sky,
only to discover
you can't go that high?
Have you ever thought,
that your dreams would come true,
only to discover...
that they won't for you?

I've seen this world for what it really is,
without the love and fairy tales.
And I have to tell you, it's always this,
that lust and love will forever fail.

Love is murder to your heart,
bringing only pain.
And though it feels good at the start,
it only ends with rain.

The rush, the glory,
of meeting someone new.
The end, it's over for me,
we're completely through...

[Chorus]

Love wore these angel wings,
looking innocent and true.
But then those little things,
led into something you couldn't do.

You knew right then, you'd been deceived,
by those rays of shiny light.
You were dumb, you actually believed,
that it'd tuck you in at night.

It's over, it's the end,
you know no one anymore.
Only love as a friend,
cause you know what pain is for.

Round, the earth.
Ground, your feet.
Stars...wishes...
Dreams that will come true
for everyone in this world

...but you...


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01-26-2005 David Pekrul    

Mary says love can't be trusted, but I think it can. You may have many loves in your life over a period of time, and you may be hurt just as many times, but there is a true love for everyone and one day you will find it.
I found my true love 33 years ago and we are still in love.




08-11-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Joan's right... it's so full of emotion! And you are absolutely right, love can't be trusted. A wolf in sheep's clothing I say! :-)


06-14-2004 Joan Jotz    

Hi Victoria,
Maybe we will hear this on the radio soon. This is well layed out, good rhymes, rolls right off the tongue as you read it. Good depth of emotion....sad, but entertaining from start to finish.
Good luck with your song writing!

~*Joan~*~


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