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Eric Gasparich
Selena M.
Mary -BrytEyz- Ball
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Pnp
by Victoria Medley (Age: 20)
copyright 06-28-2004


Age Rating: 1 to 127

 
There once was a poem,
not very good or very bad,
but the poor lonely poem,
was unhappy and sad.

It had dreams of fame,
of inspiring the whole world,
but it was abandoned by
it's author, a tiny girl.

No one would help her to
make the poem improve,
so she just cut her losses,
and figured she would lose.

So the poem stayed the same,
never getting any better,
until, one day, it read
a very interesting letter.

It talked of a website
that gave advice for free!
A holy writer's sanctuary
affectionately named PNP.

Now the poem is happy
and its sweet dream come true,
for the sad little poem
is what I have written you!


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06-06-2006 Mehrina B.    

Awww, it's adorable! I totally loved how you talked about the little, lonely poem, and how it's all happy here!! And the rhyming was cool! I can't rhyme my poems any more; I seem to have lost that touch! :( Great poem! It didn't even have any spelling errors!


08-11-2004 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

I'm so happy to know that others love PnP as much as I do! I'm even more elated to see it written down so cutely. Thank you for sharing it.


07-28-2004 Paula T.    

If you haven't entered the contest where you write a poem about a poem, you should enter immediately. This is a cute and sweet poem and I love it! You are a wonderful author, and you should enter the contest. You will win! You have an amazing talent! Happy writing!


~*Paula*~




07-16-2004 Jeniffer Brand    

Cute girly. Really cute! Did the "oh great one" fix the problem and let you edit it? Because this is a cute poem and pnp should be very proud to have someone like you write it! Good girl, good job.


07-14-2004 Wayne Thomas    

Excellent! It builds ever so nicely. Nicely done rhyme and rhythm, and the ending is perfect. In short, I guess--I like it!


07-07-2004 Buddy Ales    

Wow, this poem is so neat! Yes, like Toni said, glad for a happy ending. I can't help but give this amazing poem a 5, it is just so... Hmm... Amazing! This is a MUST for any member of PnP to read. I hope Bob reads it, he will just love it. ;-)


05-26-2004 Toni Sweeney    

Wow!!! This poem is awesome. I'm glad the poem was happy at the end. You did an awesome job. I really enjoyed the ryming. This is one of my new favorite poems from PNP.
Toni S.


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