i. f.e.e.l. t.h.e. r.a.i.n.
by
Lisa Anderson
(Age: 18)
copyright 05-30-2004
Age Rating: 7 to 127
I feel the rain drizzle on my face,
It is gently sprinkling slightly.
I feel the rain peck on my face,
I知 feeling quite brightly.
I feel the rain fall down on my face,
I知 getting very cold.
I feel the rain pour onto my face,
I知 drenched, as the sky unfolds.
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Good stuff, Lisa! You've got the rain down pat. (cheesy pun) Seriously, keep it up. As you probably know, the best way to writing is to write and write and write and read what others write. And that's what we do here at PnP. Glad you're aboard
Great Job Lisa.
Yesterday I felt the rain, herd thte thunder, and saw the lightning. It is not very often in Alaska that thunder/ lightning storms happen. I enjoy the last line of your poem the most. Keep up the good work.
Toni S.